Naww a genuine smile from White ;//3//; Lol Black sounds like my friend Dienne; she likes kids, but she doesn't want to have children (or at least until far in the future or even adopt) and she doesn't want the whole looking after part - just the having fun with them. She told me that I should have the kids, then give them to her to have fun with orz
ah... i cant slightly dislike lana after this... she is so good for white (and black). and he cares for her so much *sniffles* i hope it works out for them. for everyone really. black is adorable as always, almost too supportive! he really wants those kids doesnt he xD i really enjoyed the focus on white in this chapter. we get a little more insight into his complex, and surprisingly straightforward (at times) personality. keep up the great work!
Oh man, this chapter! I noticed a lot of things about it, specifically that Lana's an adorable sweetie, and that White is a really mournful character! (I knew that already, but wow, this really slammed it home.)
I'm really interested in learning a bit more about his situation with Lana, well, I really just wanna see more Lana :'D She sounds like she'd help White so much, even Black to an extent! Those boys really need a positive, sweet person in their lives.
And, haha, Black going forward and asking to meet Lana's dad. He really is old fashioned XD
I know that I commented on your art last time, but wow, it's really noticeable here! Your paneling is a little different from before, and the sound effects have their own little specialized speech bubbles! I really like that, it gives the sound a visual quality (does that make sense?) And there was quite a bit of hatching in here, which was something I really liked. Also, there's a lot of black in this chapter, which is a little unusual but nice. It's very stark and drags your attention to that specific panel.
Wonderful chapter, and I really loved the end picture! It reminded me of Romeo and Juliet, or maybe Cyrano de Bergerac, though hopefully Grey Is... won't have as sad an ending, lol. Can't wait for the next one.
Thanks a lot for the lovely comments and pointers miko! I feel happy when I read your words based on your keen attention for the art, it makes the effort worthwhile! I love hatching ever since I was introduced to pens but I was too obsessed about having clean pages that I was afraid to use but now I'm more confident to go back to my roots and pick the mediums and looks I like. Thanks a lot for again and you;ll sure get more on Lana and White in the future!