Oooh, new character! And we get to meet White's dad! This is getting more interesting! But it's been so long since I read the last one that I kinda forgot what the whole thing was when Black said to forget what he wrote.
Sorry, by the way, for taking so long to read this one; my old laptop finally died on me and I only just got a new one C:
You're definitely finding a more solid line to your work, it's fascinating to see. The expressions in this chapter were especially good. Now on to #11!
my favorite parts in the chapter: 1. white's angry glare! that was great. its rare we see him so worked up. black actually got the shivers 2. i like how you can see part of the kitchen reflected in the tea kettle. a nice little touch there 3. the whole scene with stash, especially the 5 things bit. adorable! 4. the panel with the view of the medical center, the trees and snow. WHAT AN IMPRESSIVE PANEL OMG. 5. black and white sleeping on that couch in the hospital <3